Manuscript Critique

Need more feedback than what beta readers provide, but don't want to commit to a pricier developmental edit?

Then a manuscript critique is perfect for you!

$0.0035/word

1 read through

✓ Thorough IN-LINE COMMENTS: Genuine reader reactions and questions; flag words, sentences, actions, or scenes that are awkward or confusing; and critical feedback on characters, plot, pacing, plausibility, etc.

✓ You can submit 5 questions about your manuscript and I'll answer them

I'm ready! What now?

#1: BOOKING INQUIRY 📋

This will help me know more about your story!

If I think we'd make a great writer-editor duo, I'll reach out to you so we can talk more about your manuscript! If you asked for a free sample critique, I will also return your submitted sample with in-line comments.

I want to help you as much as I can, so I may decline to accept you as a client if I don't believe I'll be able to provide substantial feedback or if I'm not your target audience.

If I think a different editor may be better suited for your work, I'll let you know so you can proceed to the next step of your publishing journey!

#2: AGREEMENTS 🤝

To ensure a smooth collaboration, you will be asked to agree to our CONTRACT to protect us both. This includes a clause that I will NOT enter your manuscript into any AI database such as ChatGPT.

An INVOICE for 50% of the total payment will also be sent, and another for the remaining 50% will be sent upon completion.

What do you need on your BOOKING DATE?

  • Agreement to contract. Link will be provided.

  • Email proof of payment for the nonrefundable 50% deposit. To secure your slot and for recordkeeping!

What do you need by your START DATE?

  • Send manuscript by email. Please submit it as a Microsoft Word file and formatted as 12pt, Times New Roman, double-spaced, and left-aligned. The first line of each paragraph should also be indented by 0.5 inch.

  • Send 5 questions about your manuscript by email. This ensures that I can provide the exact feedback you're looking for!

#3: FOLLOW-UP QUESTIONS 💬

An invoice for the remaining 50% balance and the last fifteen pages with in-line comments will be sent to you. Please email proof of payment for recordkeeping.

Your entire manuscript will be returned with in-line comments using MS Word. You will also receive a document (.pdf) with answers to your submitted questions.

If you have any questions about my comments or suggestions, please send me an email at storyandtheworks@gmail.com!

Ready to book your critique or edit?

Your great story awaits.