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Detailed Manuscript Critique
Need more feedback than what beta readers provide, but don't want to commit to a pricier developmental edit?
Need small and big picture feedback? Or honest but kind constructive feedback?
Then a detailed manuscript critique is perfect for you!
$0.01/word
✓ Thorough in-line comments
✓ Editorial letter with chapter breakdown for recommendations (such as scenes to change)
✓ 3 questions about your manuscript will be answered
✓ Got any follow-up questions about my comments or recommendations? Unlimited email support for 30 days after delivery is included
Also available for
SINGLE CHAPTER CRITIQUES!
✓ Thorough in-line comments
✓ Overall thoughts on impressions, plot, characters, etc.
✓ 1 question about your chapter will be answered
✓ Got any follow-up questions about my comments or recommendations? Unlimited email support for 30 days after delivery is included
I'm ready! What now?
#1: BOOKING INQUIRY 📋
This will help me know more about your story!
If I think we'd make a great writer-editor duo, I'll reach out to you so we can talk more about your manuscript! If you asked for a free sample critique or edit, I will also return your submitted sample with in-line comments and track changes.
I want to help you as much as I can, so I may decline to accept you as a client if I don't believe I'll be able to provide substantial feedback or if I'm not your target audience.
If I think a different editor may be better suited for your work, I'll let you know so you can proceed to the next step of your publishing journey!
#3: AGREEMENTS 🤝
To ensure a smooth collaboration, you will be asked to agree to our contract to protect us both. This includes a clause that I will NOT enter your manuscript into any AI database such as ChatGPT.
An invoice for 50% of the total payment will also be sent, and another for the remaining 50% will be sent 1 week before our start date.
What do you need on your BOOKING DATE?
Agreement to contract. Link will be provided.
Email proof of payment for the nonrefundable 50% deposit. To secure your slot and for recordkeeping!
What do you need by your START DATE?
Send manuscript by email. Please submit it as a Microsoft Word file and formatted as 12pt, Times New Roman, double-spaced, and left-aligned. The first line of each paragraph should also be indented by 0.5 inch.
Send 3 questions regarding your manuscript by email. This ensures that I can provide the exact feedback you're looking for!
Email proof of payment for the remaining 50% balance. For recordkeeping!
#4: FOLLOW-UP QUESTIONS 💬
Your manuscript will be returned with in-line comments using MS Word. You will also receive an Editorial Letter (.pdf) with a chapter breakdown.
Unlimited support is provided for 30 days after your manuscript critique has been delivered.
If you have any questions about my comments or suggestions, please send me an email at storyandtheworks@gmail.com!
#2: FREE SAMPLE CRITIQUE 📝
I offer a free sample critique of 1,000 words (in-line comments and overall thoughts) to help you decide if we're a good fit!
This step is not required, but this can be helpful if you're still deciding between editors.

